This Night

Looking at the stars

Slow wind  blowing

Just a small chill to it

It's quiet; peaceful

I hold your hand in mine

It feels right

Warming me all over

You lean into me

Giving me a gentle kiss

With a smile after, I give one right back

Walking now, we smile

Don't have to say much

You always keep me happy

Always saying sweet things in my ear

I hold you close

To never let you go

Never want this night, this feeling

To ever dissapear.

Reviews

[GrownUpTime]

very relatable. well written^^

[Chantee]

This is beautiful. I really felt what you were writing. Loved it. ^_^

[Matt Shriver]

I loved this. It was so perfectly written. So emotional and descriptive. I really really enjoyed reading it. It was truly beautiful. Thank you for posting it.

[solo2be]

a beautiful poem that illustrates the how the right person can make so very special. I love the imagery.