It's in my head

old poem

It's in my head

Now I speak of words

Seeing faces around me

Hearing each heart beat of their bodies

It's cold and gray outside

Stormy looking in all places

I see my imagination wandering around

The cracks on the ground where bugs crawl out of

Whispers through their ears

Words of life, I see you in my dreams

Flying around as if i'm not there

Pouring rain falls down

Running around little souls

Lighting strikes the ground in flames

Fluttering of wings all around

Chills down my back

My love for you has lifted up

Warmth around me as I go away into a new world

 

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

I really like the way this poem starts out like a twisted nightmare.

"Hearing each beat of their bodies

Its cold and gray outside

Stormy looking into all places"

Then just as suddenly as it began the nightmare ends and your off to another more hopeful dream. This is really great work and lovely imagery. Excellent job.