I Love You

I found you in my dreams

I saw the look in your eyes

I knew I loved you from the moment I cried

I never told anyone how i really felt about them

But I tell you everything because i love you

You make me happy even if you smile

I can't tell you how much i love you, I can only show you

When were alone I cherish the moment

I stare into yours eyes and see the wonders of you

I'll never forget you even if were miles apart

With all of my heart- until the last blood drops

I will always love you

To the whispers through the night

To the soft sound of your voice

I fall asleep and dream of you every night

You're the one for me and I know it

I fall for you everytime I look at you

I promise I'll never break your heart

So all I know is that I love you!

Author's Note

This is an old poem from 2004! Um i personally don't like this poem after I read it for the 1st time since '04---sad i know, um so yea I'm open to any comments/criticism.......

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

My suggestion would be formatting, the poem is strong, and could be more flowy (stupid word) if it was formatted differently. A suggestion:


I found you in my dreams
I saw the look in your eyes
I knew I loved you
from the moment I cried

I never told anyone how
I really felt about them
But I tell you everything
because I love you

You make me happy even if you smile
I can't tell you how much I love you,
I can only show you

When were alone I cherish the moment
I stare into yours eyes and see the wonders of you
I'll never forget you even if were miles apart
With all of my heart-
until the last blood drops

I will always love you

To the whispers through the night
To the soft sound of your voice
I fall asleep and dream of you every night
You're the one for me and I know it

I fall for you everytime I look at you
I promise I'll never break your heart
So all I know is that I love you!

It just breaks it up and lets in talk more... :)

~Stephanie