War Heart

Simple heart break poem

Broken heart
Torn down barriers
Burned trust
Raised guard
Fragile truth
Solid lies
Stuck in love...

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

Love the line stuck in love.

[Dream Mistress]

loved it wonderful

[marie]

its beautiful, but i can't help but feel that it is unfinished. the truth in it is so baffling and heartbreaking that i find myself lost in memories of a similar pain thank you for sharing

[Dream Mistress]

:)

[Martin Ramirez]

It tells a story in 7 lines, using just adjectives and nouns. I like it, it makes great imagery in those short lines.

[TLK]

This would have more impact if every line was two words.

The last one is easy: "stuck love" is an excellent phrase/image to end the piece. It doesn't give too much away and has multiple meanings.

"Torn barriers" also works pretty well. It does perhaps invite some sexual connotations, though.