Split in 2

my split personality.

Hi im split in becouse all the things that my parents do,one minute im tobi the fun life loving and tons of fun, Then "Hi i'm Madara i hate every thing and i want it all destroyed. Bang i just destroyed my relationship with my girl friend becouse i was bored of feeling hurt. Now i'm crying becouse i F###ed it up, the thing keeping me in this world that means everything to me.  I just wish i could understand why it hurts to like this to feel this pain.  Anger and misury is better with some company.  I want to take her by her hand and helper under stand just who I am.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Oo, interesting poem! I liked it! Great use and variety of words! Tobi is awesome! Cool poem! :D