Falling

I’ve found myself falling

Can’t help but worrying

That it’s happening

Too quickly

How could I not see

Myself as I begin to fall

Not sure I like it at all

My heart says one thing

My head says another.

 

I’ve found myself falling

I feel like I’m drowning

In emotions that I may be dreaming

I don’t want to wake

Can’t take the pain for sanity’s sake

The unfamiliar traps me

Keeps me from what I need to see

Listening to my heart say one thing

And my head say another. 

 

I’m falling for him

I’m right on the rim

Of loving without a care

I can’t see straight without him there

I’m losing the battle in my heart

While my head says this is just a start

I can’t help but feel

Love because he has helped me to heal

My heart, only to steal it from me

But I’ve fallen gladly.

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I enjoyed your read and yes its really hard sometimes to fall without being care by somebody..

[mattavelli]

This is touching. Your story has a lovely rhyme and it flows nicely. Thanks for sharing.

[Me]

Very well written poem. ..........

[SyberRose]

yes don't you just hate when there is a battle between your head and heart...I enjoyed your poem very much...SyberRose

[Holly Mason]

very lovely
true thoughts
thank you for sharing

[MAC]

what a wonderful love poem :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Free-falling but you have been caught in midair on angel-wings:)

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

This is really beautiful! I like love poetry that's got happy endings! =D
The poem even looks like a drip of water or syrup falling! Epic!

Kate