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A Book by Lady of the Ring
© 2012 Lady of the Ring
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Is there more than just 8 chapters? =) I like your plot you've got and you're really good at background descriptions. The only suggestion I could offer is to try and make the characters show more of their emotions. Overall I really enjoyed what you've got so far.
Kate
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
I am still working on the book. These chapters are just what I have so far.
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12 Years Ago
I will send you a read request when I post a new one.
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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
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