Our World

Our World

A Poem by Lady of the Ring

Lost in my own world,

wondering how I could have believed

that you could ever love me.

 

I'm stuck in a world

where people are easily deceived,

and they don't realize what they see.

 

I can't change my world

but I'll damn sure try my best

when I figure out how to.

 

This is my world

 I'll make the my own test

when I see fit to.

 

World within worlds

Happiness within pain

Love within hate.

 

Dreams fill worlds

Sanity within the insane

Lost to our own fate.

 

We fight for our world

Our weakness is our strength

Our pain is our motivation.

 

We try our best for our world

but is it ever enough?

© 2013 Lady of the Ring


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Very well penned! A lot of truths here that many fail to see or choose to ignore. Lovely piece.
"Our pain is our motivation."

Beyond true and it's very hard to draw this conclusion from life. Thank you for pointing it out, sometimes we all need reminders.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Our weakness is our strength...
Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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