Valentine's Day

Speak your mind before you let it go.

I remember

So long ago

Remembering things

Only I know

A time once

You called me sweet

And on Valentine's Day

We were suppposed to meet

But in the courtyard

On that day

I saw you

And I couldn't stay

You were with her

That B***h that I hate

You knew I did

As I would constantly state

I stayed long enough

To look you in the eye

And though it hurt

I would not cry

You stabbed my heart

And I stabbed back

I hurt you more

As my vision faded to black

When I woke up

My body so in pain

And you were beside me

Kissing my hand again and again

I could feel my hand wet

From your salty tears

And you thought me asleep

As you poured out fake fears

It would have broken my heart

Except for one thing

I knew for a fact

These were lies you would sing

To prove that point

That B***h walked in

And I have to remind you

That cheating is a sin

Yet there she stood

Thinking me dead

She celebrated

And asked you to bed

As you walked out

I sat up and glared

You looked back

And were instantly scared

You mouthed an apology

That I knew wasn't true

And as I sighed

I realized I hate you

So go on

Love that B***h

I know she loves you

But that's cause you're rich

Oh well, your problem

Not mine

I'll find a man who loves me

At some point in time

Perhaps not

On Valentine's Day

But I'm sure

He'll be perfect in his own way.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

What attracted me towards the write is actually it's title..
Since, I've a write with the same title "Valentines day"
So I was eager to read this one..
And I found it quite nice..
Yet, I think so you still need to work upon the flow..
But, its quite raw and emotional..and the best thing about it..
Great write!