Walk with me?

A walk through snow

 

Take a walk through the snow

Through a place only you know

 

Through all the cold and ice

To a place so nice

 

Covered in ice and cold

A place from times of old

 

A snow palace, of kinds

Ends the path that winds

 

Meet the girl who lives there

White from toe to hair

 

Sugary sweet

And hard to beat

 

She'll make you smile

And stay awhile

 

She ask for a walk

So that you can talk

 

You ask her name

But she says it's a shame

 

She has none

And asks you for one

 

So you agree

And name her Marie

 

She thanks you kindly

Walking backwards blindly

 

She feels normal now

She not quite sure how

 

She's the only one, you see

Who asks "Walk with me?"

Author's Note

Written while it was snowing.

Reviews

[Dshaman14]

By the way, you done it right... it really fits... i like the story behind this poem... ^^

[Dshaman14]

what kind of girl is she? im just curious...

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it very much.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a lovely poem. Wonderful write!!!

Heather

[Steven Williams]

Simple, but sweet. You used vivid imagery that really made me feel as though I was walking with the two characters. Great write and I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to the Cafe'!