Makes No Sense To Me (song - 2013)

Makes No Sense To Me (song - 2013)

A Poem by Be A Fighter

It’s 115 in the morning, darling

I can’t sleep

My mind is racing I don’t know

But it’s hard to breathe

It’s not anxiety

It’s a misery that I don’t understand

No, No

*chorus*

It’s the bottle of pills laying next to my bed that I wonder if I should take

It’s the questions in my head I’m afraid to ask cause I don’t know if I want the answers

It’s my body giving out on me at only nineteen cause I made a few mistakes

It’s the memories I don’t remember, I wonder if they’re fake

It’s everything

That makes no sense to me

*end chorus*

No no, no no, it makes no

No no, no no, it makes no sense to me

It’s two o clock in the morning darling

I’m wide awake

Thinking about my past and my regrets

It gives me heart ache

It’s not insanity

It’s a misery that I just don’t understand

No No

*chorus*

It’s the bottle of pills laying next to my bed that I wonder if I should take

It’s the questions in my head I’m afraid to ask cause I don’t know if I want the answers

It’s my body giving out on me at only nineteen cause I made a few mistakes

It’s the memories that I don’t remember, I wonder, if they’re fake

It’s everything

That makes no sense to me

*end chorus*

(instrumental break)

No no, no no, it makes no

No no, no no, it makes no sense to me

Its that bottle of pills

The questions in my head

The memories and the meds

It’s that bottle of pills

The questions in my head

The memories and the meds

None of it make sense to me

*end song*

© 2013 Be A Fighter


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Hey, I would love to hear this with music! This piece is heartbreaking and although some lines sound cliche to me, they work pretty well! I've written a song, too, it's entitled "No More". You can see my writings if you want. It's not as good as yours, though. :)

The found the following lines powerful:
"It’s a misery that I don’t understand."
"It’s the memories I don’t remember, I wonder if they’re fake
It’s everything
That makes no sense to me."

Wonderful write. :x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Be A Fighter

11 Years Ago

Wow it's been awhile since I've been on here! I'm planning on getting music up on the site start in .. read more
Azure Montessa (Blue)

11 Years Ago

Best wishes for you, then. I hope to hear more from you in the future. :)



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Hey, I would love to hear this with music! This piece is heartbreaking and although some lines sound cliche to me, they work pretty well! I've written a song, too, it's entitled "No More". You can see my writings if you want. It's not as good as yours, though. :)

The found the following lines powerful:
"It’s a misery that I don’t understand."
"It’s the memories I don’t remember, I wonder if they’re fake
It’s everything
That makes no sense to me."

Wonderful write. :x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Be A Fighter

11 Years Ago

Wow it's been awhile since I've been on here! I'm planning on getting music up on the site start in .. read more
Azure Montessa (Blue)

11 Years Ago

Best wishes for you, then. I hope to hear more from you in the future. :)

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