Valentine's Day Villanelle

Valentine's Day Villanelle

A Poem by Blonde Coma

You are sweet, loving and kind,

And after all these years you are still the same,

So will you be mine?

Let's stop pretending and get to the bottom line

Because it seems as if you and me were meant to be,

So will you be mine?

Why don’t you drop a hint or get me a clue

Because I don’t want to look back with any regret

So let's just find out if this thing between us is true.

I mean that's the least you can do

Since you like me and I like you,

Maybe our single pair can become two,

I mean one, because your hands fit mine by design

And in your arms is where I want to be.

So will you be mine?

I assure you that I'm not a land mine,

I promise not to be the choice that blows up in your face,

Because my intentions are perfectly benign

So…will you be mine?

 

© 2014 Blonde Coma


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Blonde Coma
Blonde Coma

Philadelphia, PA



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I have been writing for the past couple of years, mostly poems but I've started to dabble in a few short stories. most if not all of my writing has metaphors and a lot of ancient Greek mythology infl.. more..

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