Such A Fool.

We all know it's true.

Sometimes I feel like dieing,
So instead I start crying.

My heart is sad,
It makes me so dang mad.

Crying is stupid,
I'm such a fool,
At everything my heart will pull.

I cry because,
There's no one lying next to me at night,
No one to pull me into his arms,
No one to hold me tight.

I'm alone in a crowd,
The world seems so loud,
I want peace.

I want to lie in the warmth of his heart,
I want him to fix me,
When this world tears me apart.

I want him my tears to wipe away,
I want him beside me to lay.
I cry for him at night,
I cry for him until first light.

Then I put on a brave face,
With the world I'll keep pace.
I'll keep my imaginary him,
Locked away deep inside my broken heart.

Because I'm alone in the world.

Author's Note

;D

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

The last line of a poem is, obviously, very important. You've got a good one, here, Abbie.
(By the way, you're neither a fool nor really alone in the world; you're just gloriously young.)

[Miele1228]

This poem is great(: I reallyy like it

[Coyote Poetry]

It is good to cry. Took me years to cry for pain that could not be free till I release the hurt. Tears mean you are alive and well. A very good story in the poem. People who know how to feel and be kind. They will know the good things in a life. You are never alone as long you can breath and communicate. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[TylerG]

Great poem :) really enjoyed it!

[NickyGL]

WOW! thats...... dannnng.... i love it! its sooo true!

[al25]

Wow! I mean really wow! I'm speechless at how good this is. This is my favourite poem ever because its so real :)