My Last Breath

water lapping against the docks

all the while, a clock going tick-tock

it is time for me to end my misery

i will breathe my last breath

and then i shall plummet to my death

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

short but emotional nice job

[KateJacksonKate]

Nice piece, a little scary, but then what is art for then to evoke emotion and generate controversy.

[L. Catherine]

this is imaginative and very creative, nice work :)

[Livenrite]

ouch! nice piece:)

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw Jesse, don't die!

[Julie Beth]

i got very good imagery reading this outstanding job :)