The longest distance often lies within; but when we chance upon someone that we love, that distance becomes palpable, touchable, and real. In a moment of anticipation, we are filled with so much: thoughts of rejection, wanting the moment to be as perfect as we dream, always wondering what the other will think.
Your words allowed me to ride the distance between her plane and your breath. When the miles closed between the two, I whispered a sigh of relief to know that she had safely landed in your arms.
With so much sadness in the news today between the one plane disappearing and the other being shot down and the hundreds of lives lost, I really thought this was heading towards disaster.
I am relieved that the ending was a happy one and can but hope that it would have been the same for all those lost.
Beautiful!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Linda. I am a fan of yours as well so I appreciate this wonderful comment very mu.. read more
Thank you Linda. I am a fan of yours as well so I appreciate this wonderful comment very much.
Thank you! What a wonderful comment. I appreciate that more than you know.
Take care.. read more
Thank you! What a wonderful comment. I appreciate that more than you know.
Take care Divya.
10 Years Ago
You are welcome. :)
10 Years Ago
I actually wrote this one about 10 years ago. But i just had left it on my computer. I'm glad yo.. read moreI actually wrote this one about 10 years ago. But i just had left it on my computer. I'm glad you liked it.
I take it you are NOT from Australia then. :-)
Oh well, I had a long distance crush/relations.. read moreI take it you are NOT from Australia then. :-)
Oh well, I had a long distance crush/relationship once upon a time so I can relate to your poem.
Good write. You captured the nervousness and excited energy so well.
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i loved writing that. She was someone who worked at a gym. And she also worked on motorcycles and .. read morei loved writing that. She was someone who worked at a gym. And she also worked on motorcycles and she was thinking of coming to America to work with a racing team for a few weeks.......and if she was going to come over here she said she would look me up. I guess she didnt make it.