Finally!  They get to see each other.

Finally! They get to see each other.

A Poem by Blogger

     The long awaited meeting
 
An adrenaline Rush! An upcoming conference
She would finally get to see him late this November!

A late call to him, he excitedly listened
He would finally be able to wrap his arms around her!

~~~~~~~~

He would meet her late afternoon flight
He thought, we can dine and dance all night!

Finally the time to see him was soon to be here
Her pounding, aching heart would fill her with cheer

~~~~~~~~

He arrived early at her gate.....So that he could wait (and
wait!)
Will I know what to do? Will I know what to say?

~~~~~~~~

The announcement is made to all in the airborne room
And all in the plane feel impending doom

He got the cautious news from those on the ground
Can this be true? He asks as his hands start to
pound

She sits buckled in and she prays and she prays
She asks HIM to help the pilots to find a way

The big metal bird finally lands -Major delays
All is all right, they all received HIS praise
~~~~~~~~

Anxiously he awaits, trying to put himself at ease...

She thinks, Will he? Is he? Oh Please!

He pushes up close along with all the others

She desperately tries to maintain her druthers
~~~~~~~~

Their eyes finally meet, two uneasy smiles
It seems like its been two billion miles

She says to him softly, I'm sorry I'm so late.
He says nothing to her. He only holds her tight.

© 2014 Blogger


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The longest distance often lies within; but when we chance upon someone that we love, that distance becomes palpable, touchable, and real. In a moment of anticipation, we are filled with so much: thoughts of rejection, wanting the moment to be as perfect as we dream, always wondering what the other will think.

Your words allowed me to ride the distance between her plane and your breath. When the miles closed between the two, I whispered a sigh of relief to know that she had safely landed in your arms.

With so much sadness in the news today between the one plane disappearing and the other being shot down and the hundreds of lives lost, I really thought this was heading towards disaster.

I am relieved that the ending was a happy one and can but hope that it would have been the same for all those lost.

Beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Blogger

10 Years Ago


Thank you Linda. I am a fan of yours as well so I appreciate this wonderful comment very mu.. read more



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You crafted this story superbly. I read this, my heart beating faster. The ending brought much relief and joy. Love deserves to win. Every time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Blogger

10 Years Ago


Thank you! What a wonderful comment. I appreciate that more than you know.
Take care.. read more
AYVID N

10 Years Ago

You are welcome. :)
Blogger

10 Years Ago

I actually wrote this one about 10 years ago. But i just had left it on my computer. I'm glad yo.. read more
Well this is a plan played out daily in the states Long distance love never worked for me but I am not a globe traveler

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh man the anticipation! I can hear Carly belting it out in the background. :)

Did you mean 'druthers'? 'Their' eyes finally meet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

OMG Carly Simon, ANTICIPATION is driving me crazy...........you're welcome.
Blogger

10 Years Ago

Crap! I know and love that song too.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Have another cuppa ;)
Awwwww. :-)
That's sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

I take it you are NOT from Australia then. :-)
Oh well, I had a long distance crush/relations.. read more
Blogger

10 Years Ago

i loved writing that. She was someone who worked at a gym. And she also worked on motorcycles and .. read more
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

I like the happy ending better. :-)

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