Sippin on Ink

hmmm

 

Sippin on ink

has me

spinning

drunk

off you

as my mentals

fill up

with you

while you

dip and drop

new thoughts

in hit or miss fashion

sistatico

simpatico

we become one

if only for a moment

while your words

shimmer and shake

jive on it

and i think

on it

and reminisce on it

you capture

a moment

of the world is a stage

and my star moment

in my eyes

your words

shadow me

mirror me

are me

see me

as i reflect

on this ink filled

moment

of clarity

surrounded by you

caused by you

can i know you

as you know me

secrets not hidden

written in ink

colored with

emotions

inspired by you

led by me

can see this

thru the ink

that i’m sippin on

Reviews

[Journey]

*Bravo*
It's usually the titles that pull me in. With so much candy how can you choose - except by the wrapper. I love sippin on some "hot" ink. ;-) This is a really good spoken word piece. It flowed well. You mentioned in your "about me" section that you write like you talk, and that is essential in spoken word. I want to get better about that and not allow my editing pen to erase my creativity. Enjoyed.

[sheerpoetry]

nice write.
"secrets not hidden written in ink colored with emotions inspired by you led by me" my favorite part:)

[Jay W Valentine]

Reminds me of that Rakim line, "I start to think, and then I sink into the paper... like I was ink." It becomes a part of you. The words, the meanings, etc. You see yourself when you look down at it.

[Ivory]

Very creative piece. Liked the flow
Really good write ; )

[Thomas Hews]

It's almost iambic monometer!:D
i really like it.
also, i love the word reminisce