Maybe

Maybe... possibly... certainly
 
Maybe
she'll love me
If only I do x,y,z
u know loose some weight
watch what i say
or
maybe if i
just be me
 
possibly
she will see
that me is what she loves
with all the flaws and blemishes
foodie with a book in one hand
commenting on the world
for the world to hear
sometimes nice
sometimes not so nice
 
cause at this age i dont see myself
changing for her
and no one else
cause
certainly
i love myself
 
stepping back
widening the view range
so she can to

Reviews

[Haden]

it's ironic that we think of how they might like us more if we just wait ... unconcerned ... and yet, so concerned. this was a great read for me right now - fits perfectly in my life - that's a beautiful thing about art (done right) - you can always see your reflection in it. Jas had this on her reading list - i'm glad i checked it out!!

[d]

Maybe... possibly... certainly...luv the layout of the piece and how you explore the idea of each of these words...nice exercise indeed...*claps*

[bey]

not sure if u meant it, but this is a self search type of piece. it reads very easy but the message is poignant and from top to bottom, complete.

its a hearty write kat.