Blank

Opened up a blank page
Wanted to write about you
Wanted to write about us
 
Blank
 
Us
Me
You
 
We trying
We might make it
What more is there to say
 
Blank
 
Trying to be romantic
Trying to make it romantic
 
Thinking we just another couple in the struggle
Struggle to be
Struggle to make it
 
1 month
7  in "hetro" months
 
I'm a b***h
Self-proclaimed
Doesn't make it betta
 
You jealous
Both insecure
Keeps us in flames
 
Inflamed our passion..tethers
On me saying yes when sometimes
I wanna say no
 
You says I'm yours..
Was from the first lick
 
I say
I'm me
From the first..
push..breath..push
 
You ask am I frustrated
I question why you have to ask
 
I'm not frustrated
Learn me slower
Get to know my moods
 
Naw I ain't moody
Its just that time of the month
And that day of the week
And that hour of the day
 
And sometimes I'm just a b***h
Self-proclaimed
Doesn't make it betta
 
Blank
 
Staring at you while you sleep
Touching you while you sleep
Thinking of her while you sleep
 
Yeah I know that's unexpected
Not necessary
Should be gone
But I'm truthful
Brutal
To you
To me
 
I'm trying
Learn me slower
Growing with you slower
Cause faster leads to heartache
Cause faster leads to pain
Cause faster leads to love no more
 
We both done had enuff of that
 
Opened up a blank page
Wanted to write about you
Wanted to write about us
 

Reviews

[trinaspen]

This is the part that messed my head up:
Staring at you while you sleep
Touching you while you sleep
Thinking of her while you sleep

LOL...nice! But ya know, sometimes it's just like that. Wanna love the love feelings but all you come up with is...blank. Gotta have something to work with...

Can't believe I'm reading this 2 years later...smh...I can just kick myself!

[Crystal Elisa]

I don't know. Something about this one was alittle off. Not that i didn't like it cause i did. I'm feeling this one. Alot of the emotion here was right on, i can relate. Now that i think about it, i think that the off of this may actually help with the feel of it. add alittle uneasiness to the mood, you know...

this part:

Naw I ain't moody
Its just that time of the month
And that day of the week
And that hour of the day

And sometimes I'm just a b***h
Self-proclaimed
Doesn't make it betta

Blank

Staring at you while you sleep
Touching you while you sleep
Thinking of her while you sleep

Yeah I know
That's unexpected
Not necessary
Should be gone
But I'm truthful
Brutal
To you
To me

Fi-yah!

[Ivory]

This is very creative and honest piece.
Your words speak of the truth thats goes on in many relationships.
I esp. liked this line :

You jealous
Both insecure
Keeps us in flames

Another great write from ya : )