Autumn

What is the perfect fall like?

Autumn

     

           The leaves are now pastel brown,

           The smell of pumpkin spreads all over the town,

           Every teen girl has already started re-watching Gilmore Girls,

           It has already started getting chilly,

           While we lay down in our warm couch cuddling with warm blankets,

           Nothing but the sound of the birds chirping and the rustling of leaves,

           While he slowly caresses my forehead,

           This is all I could've ever asked for,

           This is comfort,

           This is perfect,

           This is autumn....

Author's Note

sorry if it's bad :(
this is my first time!!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it is a straightforward poem that tells a story...maybe more prosy.
And yet, it creates a scene that is describing my favorite season...
so I am for you.
j.

[Lilac Lilies]

Ooh! I think you did well on this, Autumn is a very nice time with Autumn leaves and Halloween, I love it very much