Realisation

A perfect decision....

You can't be someone else
Someone else can't be you
It is a fact known by all
But applied by few
The person writing this is of the same crew
Who lost herself
Trying to be someone she is not, She knew.

But question is,Did she learn???
What she got out of this burn???
May be,
May be not
But the thing is she fought


Circumstances forced her to be alone
To feel the pain she had never really known
That mumma's girl grew up
Now thankful to God that things screw up.

Because now she know what is love
It is not BF GF or other stuff
Love is within us
Finding that in others will only create fuss

SO run and fly and hit the sky
Don't look back just try and try.....

Author's Note

First poem...
Please comment your views......

Reviews

[kclyaine]

Good job on your first poem. Well I like the first stanza. I'm not sure about the rest. I mean its within your theme, but its like you haven't completely convey what you want to say. The ending seems kinda rush. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, you'll improve as you write more poems.

[Beatitude sunshine]

Thanks and I do agree....