And This Is What He Told Me

Because his words mean so much

He told me he loved me and I wasn't sure what to do

I took a couple of days, maybe one or two

I decided as final  that the best for it all

Would be to tell him everything before the fall

I professed my love, I professed my devotion

He turned away and he mocked my emotion

It goes without saying that when you let down your guard

 

The damn b*****d will tell you to put it on a hallmark card

 

 

Author's Note

This is exactly what he told you and I just needed to release my anger. It's nothing special but I'm just so torn at the moment. Comment if you will

Reviews

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I love the ending, Madelyn. There is nothing wrong with when writing in "the moment", and I think you pulled it off pretty well. Great job:)

-Cord

[Kent Smotherman]

I actually really liked this piece. It's simple, but strong. The rhyming pattern was broken in one line, but that's really all. The last line is just priceless, good work.

[Madelyn Defray]

It was meant to be broken, but thank you very much for commenting. I'm glad you liked it

[Madelyn Defray]

actually I take that back, there's a line that needs to be omitted. Thanks for pointing that out!