Sunday

EDITED AND REVISED!

 

Rough Draft:

Sunday:

"No parties, no friends, don't waste my money, call if you have any emergency, stay out from our room, no girls in my house, and don't eat all the food at once".

"I know, I know, don't worry everything will be fine" Aban reassured.

This wouldn’t be Aban’s first time home alone. His parents always made a habit and left him alone to go on vacation. He didn't mind, he was unnerved when it came to crowded places with too much happiness in the air. He preferred simple, quiet places, a one man’s island.

They packed their bags and soared away from their little bird; Aban locked the door and shuffled to his room. He puffed on his plush bed and began to reflect. He loved his room, it was his sanctuary. Everything was his, it was his claimed land. His bed was layered with plush pillows and dark quilts softly touched by the rays of the sun from the window. The walls were covered with posters of curvaceous women and Heavy Metal bands. A sea of clothes and random items washed over the floor. A stereo system that usually blasted Metal and Dubstep sat by the foot of his bed. He laid there next to the window absorbing the sun, steadily stroking his long black hair. Soon his thoughts began to scatter as he drifted into a dreamless sleep.

 

Author's Note

REVISED AND EDITED!!!!

-Tired BlissZzz.....

Reviews

[dw817]

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Aban has it good. I can't remember any time at all I was left alone at home, not even in my teens. I guess Dad thought I would get into trouble or something. :) While when I was older it wasn't a, "babysitter" per se, my Dad would invite one of his friends to stay and keep me 'company.' :)

[TL Boehm]

this is a great start. Love the little parental no no list at the opening and the description of his room.

[Blissful Sin]

Thanks for reading! It's always a pleasure seein you!

-Bliss

[Silent Wolf]

This was really good, described me almost perfectly, though I am a girl, and I have brown hair. I like to be alone, my room is my sanctuary, it's normally messy, I am left home alone occasionally but not too often since I have siblings, and yeah. I can relate, which makes it pretty good in my book. :3

[Blissful Sin]

I'm glad you like it! I am trying to sway that way in my writing now!
:)

-Bliss

[Silent Wolf]

Sweetness. :3

[ThoughtsofShyann]

Okay the begining really got my attention I really loved like it was amazing!

[Blissful Sin]

thanks!!!
-Bliss

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really like this plot..
nextttttt

[Ellie EM]

So far so good! I love Dubstep!! I'll keep on reading! :)

[Tim Piotrowicz]

A great beginning. Not fluffy in your descriptions, but just the right amount that sets up the stage for this story. I can see it all in my mind.