Lie With An Angel

You're the familiar tune I hear in my head

A tune that carries me to serenity

They say don't rest your happiness in a person

But they never said a thing about angels

I've wrestled with the devil

But I'm ready to lie with an angel

Darkness never exists where you reside

It used to be jailed inside my rib cage

You've got Heaven's eyes

And Hell's smile

Carry me to serenity

Let me feel a little warmth

I've been feelin' cold for far too long

Give me a taste of Heaven

I've been down below for quite some time.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the concept in your opening line - the "familiar tune I hear in my head..." You work the contrast well, though I feel like this piece could be fleshed out a bit.