Her River

It was said to believe

That she had a river in her head

A stream of delicate waters

Crashing against her cranium

Her river is what fueled her bones

And kept her afloat

Some called her crazy

But she didn't listen

She had already sent them downstream.

Reviews

[New Theory]

Great poem, my interpretation a wild spirit lives in you; let it free, its beautiful when unhindered by anything.

hey can you please review this for me..

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/new%20theory/1327938/

[Blue]

There's beauty in the simplicity of your words, Megan. This took my breath away.

[Anand Sehgal]

Her river is what fueled her bones


And kept her afloat


Some called her crazy


But she didn't listen


She had already sent them downstream.


you have written real classy lines. Loved it :)
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