Fade Away

Lets fade away

To where they'll never find us

Like how the stars fade in the morning sky

Lets seep through the cracks

And break the walls around us

Lets fade away

To where we'll only have each other

And the forgotten stars

Dearly missed as dawn breaks

Reviews

[Devesh]

This reminded me of a beautiful song called 'Fade into You'. There's something ethereal about this piece. Thanks for sharing! =)

[Blue]

I like the dreamy quality of this poem.

[Rita L. Sev]

Simple, clean images and a nice flow here, Megan.

[Sapphire Naylor]

I like the secrecy in this poem. It is well thought out. I enjoyed it :)