Reasons

Reasons

A Poem by Megan

Give someone a reason to love
And they will
Give someone a reason to breathe
And they will
Give someone a reason 
To aspire
To fulfill
To mature
To create
To live
And they will
If you can prove it
They'll make it happen.

© 2013 Megan


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Haha, lovely, Megan. You hit it spot on. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Give and receive. That the eternal law. Very noble thoughts . Loved the write :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this poem a lot. I like how, even though it's not a rhyming poem, the repeated "will" along with "fulfill" give it a nice rhythm. I like the message of the poem as well. I'm with you 100% when reading this until I get to, "If you can prove it." I had to read that line a couple of times before I understood what you meant. I wonder if the word "convince" instead of prove might flow better. What about saying, "Convince them" instead of "if you can prove it." Then, that phrase is in the same format as "Give someone..."

When I read this poem, I really feel like you must have experienced something like this, in order to be able to write like this. I cannot guess whether you are the one who has been inspired, or whether you have been the inspirer. Either way, great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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A Poem by Megan