Blinding

How is it possible

For one to bring so much light

Into another's world

Completely unaware of their own glow

Your shine seeks through my bedroom blinds

And kisses me good morning

I swim in your ocean blue eyes

Every time I gaze into them

You're blind of your shine

Which is funny because

You say I am too

I guess we're a couple of fools 

Blinding each other

With all of the light and love we can give.

 

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I like the theme and the light approach, which makes it more effective.

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is beautiful. There is such a softness to your words that is so appealing. You have penned a sweet and gentle love poem!

:) Julie

[thespaceinmybed]

This is pleasantly hopeful. I like all the references to light. Well done. I hope you keep writing, this is good.

[Latifa]

Completely unaware of their own glow i like this one best