Sanity & Freedom

The choirs in my head

Are my only sense of sanity

The tigers running through my mind

Keep my blood flowing

The waves crash against my cranium

Letting me know I'm alive

Paradise lives and breathes inside of my being

It may be a pure void of my imagination

But it's my only link to sanity

And my only glimpse of freedom.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"Paradise lives and breathes inside of my being
It may be a pure void of my imagination
But it's my only link to sanity
And my only glimpse of freedom."

My favorite lines. :)

[Heather]

i love the whole concept of this and how dramatically it changes throughout! some truly beautiful writing, lovely read and great job!!

[Latifa]

it has a further meaning into it great one megan keep writing

[Adam Crate]

This is a great poem and I really enjoyed reading it. The concept of linking the imagination to freedom is one I've heard before but you approach it in a unique way. My favorite lines were:

"The tigers running through my mind
Keep my blood flowing"

It contrasted the line about the "choir in my head" very well, because I think of choirs as serene and tigers as vicious.