I'm Alive

With every note she sings, I feel more alive

I can see right through my crystal green eyes tonight

I see the face in the mirror staring back at me

Fire burning through my being

The melody carelessly flows through my veins

My mind is fighting through the flames

Her heavenly voice carries me to cloud nine

All of these little things make me feel so alive.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"The melody carelessly flows through my veins
My mind is fighting through the flames."

Lovely choice of words! :)

[Emmy]

I love the sentence "fire burning through my being" nice job!