Why I'm Here

Why I'm Here

A Poem by Megan

Before I was born, my mother had two daughters
Five year old Niki, and newborn Lindsay
Sadly, Lindsay passed away at four days old because of heart complications
My parents tried and tried to have another child
I eventually made my way here
But here's the thing,
My parents originally only wanted two children
If Lindsay hadn't died, I might have not been born
My mother also said she'd stop trying to have another child once she reached 40 years old
I was born the day before her 40th birthday
I crept my way into this world for a reason
I was given the last minute chance to live and breathe for a reason
I will find that reason.

© 2013 Megan


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Powerful shift to the ending. I love this story for it is very clear now that you are here for a reason (and good luck on finding that reason, Megan!).. Uhm, I think this would be better if you use poetic devices instead of being too literal.. Imagery is a powerful tool, too. Anyway, good write! :x

Posted 11 Years Ago


I miss Lindsay even 21 years later but I'm so glad I got you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very very heart emotion felt within that poem wow! Great job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


let your name be known and make Lindsey proud wherever she is. this is very touching and reminds us all that we have a purpose. keep up the good writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Megan

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Wow this was heartfelt!! This truly has a lot of emotion

Posted 11 Years Ago


Megan

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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A Poem by Megan