Billions Of Souls

Next time you stand out in the rain

Think of every drop hitting your skin

Representing a soul in this world

One drop after another acts as another stranger

Someone you've never met

Never seen

Crashing into your skin

Billions of drops

Billions of souls

How beautiful.

Reviews

[Rosaria_V]

Just beautiful!!

"Next time you stand out in the rain

Think of every drop hitting your skin

Representing a soul in this world

One drop after another acts as another stranger

Someone you've never met"

[Subversive Reality]

Ooh I like this one! Well written, touching.

"One drop after another acts as another stranger
Someone you've never met
Never seen
Crashing into your skin"

Lovely writing

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Great imagery. The cadence of this poem is dramatic and emotional. The simplicity of the words contrasts to the depth of the message that you want to convey, which I find very effective. The last three lines make a great end, with a tone that is almost dreamy and heaven-like. This is well-written. :x