Lost

Becoming lost

Is one of the easiest things you can do

Especially if it's within yourself

A lion too afraid to roar

A bird too weak to fly

A human too lost to imagine

Sometimes we constrain ourselves from our own natural abilities

When you find yourself drowning 

In your own being

Only you can pull yourself out

Not your mom

Not your best friend

Not even God

Only YOU can tell when you're lost

Only YOU can pull yourself out

Dry your eyes

Dust off yourself

Find your light

And do what you were born to do.

Reviews

[Rosaria_V]

I loved the meaning in this poem, you did such a great job and I love your writing

[Katie]

I really liked this nice job, I agree it was more telling a story, but I think a story in a poem and I liked that. Good job

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I am not really an expert in criticizing poems but this one sounds like an essay than a poem to me. Nevertheless, I love the message that you convey. And also the imagery that you used. Your writings inspire me. Keep on writing. :)