Look Up At The Moon

A couple is torn to be apart from each other.

When I look up at the moon

Promise me you will too

So I know I'm not alone

Make it feel just like home

Maybe I'll see your reflection

Uncover all of your imperfections

Write me a letter engraved in the stars

I promise I'll see it no matter how far

I'll see you again sometime soon

But until then, promise me you'll look up at the moon.

Reviews

[4$H]

Its very well written :O
Also, I believe this amount of depth comes through experience :P
Well done!!

[Megan]

thank you! I started writing in late-June. I really love doing it! :)

[LightforChrist]

This poem also reminded me a little bit of "Romeo and Juliet" as well. I love how you used such strong emotions to convey the significance of true love in this poem. Great job! :)

[Megan]

Thank you so much(:

[Clara]

For some reason, this poem reminded me of 'Romeo and Juliet'.
There is a great sense of wistfulness and longing in this write.

I enjoyed this.

[Megan]

Thank you so much :)