Goodbye

Goodbye

A Poem by Bliss
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I wrote this when I was 17 after I got dumped, lol. Seems silly now, but oh well.

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You've hurt me once, you've hurt me twice, but I shall hurt no more. I took up on my own advice, so now you're out the door.

 

You promised me our love was true, you swore it by and by, I should've known what you would do. I should've known you'd lie.

 

Even though you will be missed, I'm glad we're not together. My heart could never live like this and think about forever.

 

 

© 2008 Bliss


Author's Note

Bliss
Kinda silly. It sounds like I dumped him when I was the one who got canned, lol.

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I like it ^_^

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sometimes we are better off not with someone even when we love them... I love the straight forward I can make it without you vibe of this piece. That last sentence was very impactful way to end it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2008

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Bliss
Bliss

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