The Fall

I am done fighting.
I am done struggling.
I am done.

There is nothing, no strength.
There is nothing, no willpower.
There is nothing.

I let myself fall,
something otherworldly I hear
but I feel no fear,
it's darkness's call.

I let go of all,
and still I fall.

A long sought sensation,
I now am darkness's creation.
I indulge into the depths,
as they welcome me
a part of them to be.

I let go of all,
and still I fall.

I am darkness.
I am depression.
I am.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

esp loved the last 3 paragraphs
its like you were falling into the darkness as it beckons you and you sought refuge in the dark
i have been there at times as well
this is a good poem describing depression
good luck in my comp

[Carla]

It's a beautiful poem, it captures the emotion wanted to be shown. Truly wonderful

[The Blinding Darkness]

thank you!

[Emily Muir]

Wow! This poem is so strong and emotional, almost made me cry, I love it.

[Arpita Mondal]

I feel this poem so much. The darkness, the fall, fear of nothing. God, you made me emotional. I loved the poem. :)

[The Blinding Darkness]

I'm glad you liked it and that it made you emotional as it was my goal to make others feel with the massage of the poem