Why Save me!

This is a poem i just wrote on the top of my head. It is about all those people who are out there and feel alone and worthless.

I am lost!

Where am I ?

It is so dark in this place!

My eyes seem to go dark

As I stay here.

The walls collapse on me

And I am so lost.

Save me please someone

I need your help.

Where is my knight in the shining armor?

That I have read about.

I guess no one will save me.

And I will be here forever.

After all who will save someone?

Who is not worth to be saved!

 

Author's Note

Hope you like it :)

Reviews

[McKinleyA]

I like how you mix feeling emotionally lost and physically lost together, it brings a vivid picture to mind. The emphasis by using the red letters was a good touch, as well!

[Coyote Poetry]

This is very good poetry. A cry for help. Then accepting no-one is coming. I like the ending. Everyone is worth saving. I guess we must be in the right place at the right times. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tai Ryens]

This poem spoke out to me, and the only thing I can think of about it is that a soul would shout these very words in times of distress.
This would really enlighten up a discouraged persons day, it surely brightened mine! Haha, nice and enjoyable write, keep it up!

[The Shadow of the Dawn]

as always good write