The wolves have no equal. A man with a gun can overcome a wolf. A 120 pound wolf will destroy a common and defenseless person. The animals of nature are born with positive and strong senses. I like the ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
A great job with this poem. You gave me a new perspective for them... But, still, if I see one, I will try to over power it so that it doesn't kill me. I see them as kinder creatures now that are misunderstood, though. A wonderful poem and keep on writing!
Great job on this one, it makes wolves sound harmless, but still startling at the same time. Not to demote this poem or anything, but just in my opinion, the flow is ruined by the fourth stanza. I don't know, when I read it aloud, I always struggle with that part, and that kind of ruins a flow. Despite that, great poem!
The wolves have no equal. A man with a gun can overcome a wolf. A 120 pound wolf will destroy a common and defenseless person. The animals of nature are born with positive and strong senses. I like the ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
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