Chapter 8

Chapter 8

A Chapter by Blessed_Angel

"Waite! Are you telling me that Becky is the one out to kill me." Sloveig paced back and forth unable to take all this in. Becky was her best friend and now she is out to kill her. Sloveig turned to Arista .
"So tell me is she a wolf too?"
"Jessica she is something worse much worse. She is what we call the Kimar"
"Arista Don't scare her."
"But Damian she must know about her in order to know how to defeat her."
"Waite defeat her like kill her?"
"Now Jessica you have to if she is left alive she will kill you and the world will go to hell. Do you understand me The world will crash and burn if you fail."
Sloveig Looked at Arista and Damian. She knew that she must do this even if she did not want to. She knew killing her best friend will be hard but it is to save the world. Sloveig sighed and sat down in a chair. She put her hands over her eyes. She could not help but see Becky sitting next to her on the bus. Her blond hair waving in the breeze and her green eyes sparkling in the sun. They been best friends since kindergarten and now she is faced with the choice to Not kill Becky or save the world.
She had no idea what she would do when the time came to face Becky. If she could go through with the mission or not. Sloveig turned to Damian as he began to speak. She knew this would be it her time to make the choice to help them or not.
"Sloveig it is now time to make the choice. If you choose to keep the name they give you you can go back to the pack but if you choose your old name you decided to help us." 
Sloveig looked back from Arista to Damian. She rubbed her head and nodded.
"Ok i will help you"
Damian smiled "That is great Jessica and now i have something for you." 
He turned to the door as it opened. The times seemed to move slowly but fast at the same time. As the door opened up Jessica could not believe her eyes. She had to rubbed her eyes trying to get the tears to stop from running down her face like a river.It was Lucillian but how could he be here? She did not understand. Jessica shook off the thought and ran to him. Before she knew it she was being swooped in to his arms and pinned agents his chest. Tears rolled from her eyes and on to Lucillians chest. Jessica smiled.
"Lucillian...How..I mean.. You can't be here I saw you die. I saw the last breath escape your mouth." She said as she stepped back from him.
"Jessica why are you scared i am back but for a short time." He paused "See Jessica i am only back to help you defeat Becky. Then i have to go." 
By the look on Jessica's face Lucillian knew that  she was hurt.
"Jessica i know that you are hurt but i am only here to help you"
"Lucillian i love you.."
"I love you too Jessica but that won't change a thing with me leaving. That won't change"
Tears were now streaming down her face. Jessica Looked at Lucillian and stormed out of the room. Lucillian was about to chase after her but Damian stopped him. 
"She will be ok Luke trust me she will be just fine."
"Damian She will not be ok i Know her future."
Damian's eyes opened wide "What do you mean?
"I mean i know the out come of the battle Jessica will.."
Luke was cut off by a loud crash through the walls. Soon they were surrounded by Kur and his pack. Kur looked at Lucillian and then whistled. The loud sound of foot steps echoed through the air. Lucillian looked up to see a 20 foot monster. It was Becky or the Kimar. Lucillian knew the battle had started.


© 2011 Blessed_Angel


Author's Note

Blessed_Angel
hope you enjoyed it

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

I agree with Bryanna's comments. Good job. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very strong chapter. Bringing back a friend to assist. I had to do a re-read of the very good tale. I hope to read more. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I noticed some lowercase i's. Also, there were mistakes in your dialogue. Whenever you say the name of the person you are speaking to directly, you need a comma on both sides of the name. Unless, of course, the name is at the beginning of the sentence. Also, Ok should be OK as I just recently found out and after that should be a comma because you had it at the beginning of a sentence (It is at the beginning of this chapter in your dialogue).
Just thought I should point that out because your story would look a bit more professional. It already sounds amazing so now just focus on the looks of it and the structure. I would also like to mention that a number, unless it is a year or something written on paper like a letter, it should be written out. So the 20 I saw you should say twenty. Other than all that, this was an excellent chapter and I look forward to more! Send me another RR for the next chapter! Good job and keep on writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

223 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on September 14, 2011
Last Updated on September 14, 2011


Author

Blessed_Angel
Blessed_Angel

CLARKSVILLE, TN



About
Hello all my name is Blessed_Angel. I am a first time mom of a baby girl named Sayge and she is my world. i have a great fiance and i love him so much. I love to ride horses and take care of animals.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Cavalry Cavalry

A Poem by TJ


Loneliness Loneliness

A Poem by tHe