Understand.

Must my life turn to hell,

And drag me along with it.

Must it try to break my heart,

and take the one i love.

I don't understand,

how i hurt you so much,

and how it came to this?

I just want my life back,

and you with it.

I just want to understand,

how you feel,

and how i can help.

No matter what happens in the future,

your the only one i can love.

I just want to let you know,

if you leave me,

my life is over,

and i have nothing to live for.

You are my world,

you are my life,

please stay with me.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

This is what I am going through. Well done! Keep on penning.

Cute, to say the least. But not bad at all. Keep writing.

[Sakib]

Nice thought. Evocative. Great writing.

[Arianna]

intense emotion.
its completly beautiful, and portrays your emotion exquisitly.
well done:)

[DaydreamingAngel~]

Very beautiful. Leaving the ones we love can really be just like a curse.

[Ripple of Aqua]

The curse of a lost love is very shattering to the soul, this does tell that tale. Very well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime if we are lucky. A real love will forgive us and accept us back. Those gifts are rare. A poem with desire to return to a good place that was lost. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Blessed_Angel]

well this is more like in the future of what could happen if things stay this way.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Your love is precious.The leaver is unlucky

[Tasha]

Wow, this is so sad the heartache of someone you love leaving you forever. I felt like I was actually in this piece and that's what I loved about it. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra