SAVE!

SAVE!

A Poem by Blessed_Angel

How can one be so mean,
when the world is hell,
When their are people crying in the night.
How can you go around calling names,
when their are wars to be tamed,
and people to save.
I just don't understand,
How can someone be so cruel,
when the world is cruel enough to you.
How can one take a life,
and still keep living them selves,
with no regret in their heart.
We all need to stop,
we all need to think,
on what we are doing wrong.
We all need to help,
we all need to save a life,
then maybe just maybe,
Our world can be saved too.

© 2011 Blessed_Angel


Author's Note

Blessed_Angel
I think that my writers block is going away yay...well enjoy the poem.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

so true..

Posted 13 Years Ago


A very good, true poem. These questions made me think. It was sad in the beginning, but I agree: our world can be saved. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a beautiful written poem. I love the ending. Well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this it is so true

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice write, then again urs always r. anyway great job and keep on writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree with this :) actions can get out of control!
~Clara Quinn

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the road your reflection took. I agree whole heartedly on what you speak of and I wish there were more people out there that did stop and speak to the people who need a person to listen to them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well written and thought and said... :D I really liked it! My parents always told me to think before saying anything or before my actions... Didn't always work out with me. :) I really enjoyed this! Good job and keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


We all hope for the love of humanity to raise our spirits and find anew purpose for our kin

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope everybody thinks like you. Then the world will become a better place. Thanks for sharing this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

303 Views
13 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 16, 2011
Last Updated on July 16, 2011

Author

Blessed_Angel
Blessed_Angel

CLARKSVILLE, TN



About
Hello all my name is Blessed_Angel. I am a first time mom of a baby girl named Sayge and she is my world. i have a great fiance and i love him so much. I love to ride horses and take care of animals.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Forgotten Forgotten

A Poem by TJ