Just another poem..

Just another poem..

A Poem by Blessed_Angel

 Little rain drops fall from the sky,
One by one by one Oh my,
Those pesky little rain drops falling from the sky.
Tiny little bumble bees buzzing in my ear,
Buzz buzz buzz, Bu buzz i hear,
Oh those tiny little bumble bees buzzing in my ear.
Little puppy dogs barking at trees,
Bark bark bark Bark oh that annoys me,
Those pesky little puppy dogs barking at trees.
Beautiful little birds flying so free,
Flap Flap Flap that inspires me,
Oh those beautiful birds flying so free.
Flowers in the garden blooming with glee,
oh how i wish that could be me,
those lovely flowers blooming so free.
The sun is setting with out a fright,
it is almost time to say good night,
to the sun who is setting with out a fright.

© 2011 Blessed_Angel


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oh my

Posted 13 Years Ago


No words can explain how this makes me feel

Posted 13 Years Ago


O M G~ I'm speechless~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very different format which I love! The description is terrific! You must have put quite a bit of thought into this. Good job and keep on writing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one! You did a great job. Love how you used the pictures to illustrate each stanza. Well done! Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I kike both the message and he way it is conveyed I think I like structure more than most though lately I have been changing the rules a bit

Posted 13 Years Ago


to be honest, I usually don't like simpler rhymes like this, but, for some reason, this took me back to my childhood....my mom would read me poems and show me pictures like these. it made me feel renewed somehow. I needed it today. thanks.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked how you used the pictures to give more meaning to the poem. Well written, I really enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful words match beautiful pictures! Great work.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hello all my name is Blessed_Angel. I am a first time mom of a baby girl named Sayge and she is my world. i have a great fiance and i love him so much. I love to ride horses and take care of animals.. more..

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