My Heart Is Yours

Like a bouquet of red roses, so precious and bold,

A symbol of affection, or so I am told.

A representation of my love I give to you,

Just so I can show you that my love is true.

 

A kiss, a hug, a subtle stare,

Our love is eternally clear.

You can feel my heart beat as we embrace,

It fails to remain at a steady pace.

 

I want you with me day and night,

You light my world, like a candle in the night.

You bring out a new me; oh how divine,

I am so glad to call you mine.

 

Your touch, your smile; melting this heart,

This feeling; this bliss; our love shall never depart.

Your spirit, made one with the one that dwells within me,

Such devotion; as genuine as can be.

 

If only this was not a precious dream,

A dream that can come true, as dismal as things may seem.

This tear, a tear that signifies a hope to find,

Find someone that will always have me in mind.

 

Such joy, yes, laughter that we will share,

A spark in our eyes, signifying every ounce of care.

My love, I search for you; I feel you are close,

When I will find you, only Heaven knows.

 

There is just one thing I ask and I ask with all my soul,

If you are listening to me, do not just say hello.

Greet me with a kiss, a hug, a subtle stare,

Then my mind, yes, it will be cleared.

 

Then and only then will my emotions be well spent,

Like the love of my Father, yes, the reason for His son's descent.

Like a bouquet of red roses, so vivid, so bold,

Yet, I will give you my heart instead, for you to eternally hold.

Author's Note

a piece i did for an exam...but I realized this piece is one of the most emotional love pieces I have done..and I found the need to share it..

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Queen, you have out done yourself with this one!
Excellent write!

If only this was not a precious dream,
A dream that can come true, as dismal as things may seem.
This tear, a tear that signifies a hope to find,
Find someone that will always have me in mind.

Really...found truth in this verse.

[Broken Warrior]

A very heart felt and emotional piece. Nothing exaggerated, very insightful. Excellent write.

[THE LOST ROSE]

"A" i know you got an "A". Wonderful written. I was happy to see your smile on your avatar. I know you have been through hell but you kept writing and sharing. I love this piece. You did quite well and our Father is going to keep letting you blessed us.

[luke312]

It has a flow that there is no doubt the depiction was good and expression great you did good charms with that there is no debate.

[Kusanagi Kyosuke]

and say wow that is emotional it kinda long tho but still good ^^