Our Infinite Love

It's amazing how hardships come and go yet this candle still burns at a steady rate...

"I love you"...could these words lack the ability to convey the deep emotion we truly feel?

Could it be that these words are not for us as they are used too commonly?

Could it be that those words just don't suit our bond,

As what we may show is utterly restricted but what we feel is limitless?

Could it be that it's just meant to be this way..that admiration should be left in the open as committment is forbidden?

That could very well be the case...

 

You and I...we have something unique...

Although this is a situation that we're forced to be in...there's just something about "us" that keeps that flame going,

It brings out our laughs....makes our smiles shine...and makes every moment we spend together, a time to remember...

It's amazing that although our circumstances do not allow us to officially express how we truly feel,

Destiny allows us to communicate this without words...

To communicate this with our bond,

To communicate this by the syncronization of or hearts.

 

Even if this emotion is not made official in the future...you will always have a place in my heart.

I know I mean a lot to you....and the feeling is reciprocated.

Our bond; our love...surpasses all trials.

Like a candle whose flame glistens in the dark night, so does our love in these dark times.

With a strong gust of wind, it flickers rapidly, yet, it never goes out; it has no need to be rekindled.

This flame will go on until it's host wishes to see its hopeful light no more...

This flame burns endlessly.

Yes, our infinite love will live on forever more...

Author's Note

Dedicated to the one who'll always have a special place in my heart...no matter what. You're in my life for a reason...God Bless

Reviews

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

This deserves a standing ovation!!!
This is simply brilliant, I can tell that you took your time while writing this because it feels so calm and assured.
I really like the progressions, imagery and tangible emotions of this piece, I would put my favorite lines in this review but I would be retyping the entire poem! lol
I enjoy all of your writing and this is a nice change of topic.

"As what we may show is utterly restricted but what we feel is limitless"
That line amongst others are truly innovative.

Excellent write!

Marvin Lewis

[Jason Henry]

it's a great overall write, but the first stanza really stood out for me...it was nothing short of brilliant. it gave new light on an old topic...and the rest of the poem i can relate to oh so much...thanks for sharing this!

[Lyrical Love]

Wow!!! You really blossomed in this piece!
Great voice...I totally agree with the other reviewers, except the 'date'.
LOL!
I applaud you-this is well done.

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I really throughly enjoyed this write and can relate to it, i just adored these lines right here, well written.

Destiny allows us to communicate this without words...
To communicate this with our bond,
To communicate this by the syncronization of or hearts.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Thanks for sharing your talents with us all. This is excellent. I love 90% of the lines and I am crazy about the other 10%. So continue to do your thing Blessed. There are readers of your gift that date you when you write and post. Much Love. Peace!

[Broken Warrior]

Beautiful....what else is there to be said? None of these words came from thought, rules, or technique, this is too beautiful. Wow charms, wow! I love it!

[luke312]

A Righteous Expression That Shows The Light After Love Very Nice

this will go down as one of ma faves