I Surrender

Where's this getting me?

Who am I fooling?

What's the point of all of this?

All of this immaturity...

Ranting and raving...

For what?

All because I cannot get my way?

All because I just cannot seem to find my way out of this sudden darkness?

All because I'm simply being impatient?

 

Shame on me.

 

This is getting me nowhere...

God will provide...

He'll provide the one I'm meant to be with...

As I'll meet him in the future.

God will provide peace in my family..

God will provide rest for me...

 

I've finally woken up to the fact that hey..life is not fair...

Various experiences will come and go...

Just depends on how I handle it..

I've learnt this lesson the hard way..

But atleast I've learnt it well...

I'm ready to jump into the abyss...yes, MY unknown...

I'm ready to take on future emotions...

Future situations.

 

Enough complaining..

Enough crying...

Enough of this Angry expression...

Enough of the resentment..

Enough of the past.

 

I've learnt to live with things in life...

I declare peace upon my heart,

No more war...

Time to move on...

All that's left to say is...I surrender.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Well expressed, life has many twist and turns, often we think we are on track and just around the next bend is a road block and we got to be patient enough to wait or find a way around it.

The pains of life can sometimes consume us and we become lost. Faith is the best way to find ourselves.
Never should surrender be that you gave up, but that you have accepted.
Nice write.

[Lyrical Love]

This is a wonderful write.
I applaud your next step into
maturity.

[Mr. Mack]

ARE U READY to take on a future emotion??? ._....anyways idk if i'm the 1..but i would love to be...u seem to have been through a lot emotionally,and i would love to show u that not all guys are dogs :{...a i want is a chance :(.........hope this comment doesn't disturb u or spoil ur review board

[BlessedLove]

i am surrendering...i was causing war within myself and bringing it to others...now i'm surrendering the war in order to move on.

[luke312]

I Think your finally getting it life is full of pain and disappointment and it is you and you alone who can deal with it. learn to forget the bad and cherish the good cause in life that's all we can do but i don't think your really getting it. Your not surrendering your not being immature you where hurt that any one who has been in love can understand and your not surrendering your moving on.

Excellent poem as usual.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I really like your attitude here, very well-written.
Its thought-provoking and inspiring...
Excellent write!