Perfect Time

Longing for moments past

move my heart forward

 

into anticipating smiles

remembering love

 

as it once reflected in

a heart waiting perfect time

 

now bookmarked with blushed

kisses kept sacred and true

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I really like the simple and short message of this piece. You don't get lost in excess words or thoughts. It is clear and brief. My favorite lines are, "Longing for moments past...move my heart forward". With it as the opening lines, I was taken from the beginning.

Beautiful words,but it seems out of order,unstructured.