Fallen Angel

This is the other of the two poems I'm most proud of.

 He's a fallen angel that has lit the path of darkness

when all other lights went out.

He's been struck down to earth

a boundless spirit what he's told.

He brings hopefulness to where

all hope has been forgotten.

He's our fallen angel

the one that we've been searching for,

a fallen star to guide us back to the light

with wings of leather black as night.

Reviews

[L0v3craft]

I can see how you're so proud of this-- its rather lovely and quite mysterious.

Is this about Lucifer perceived in a different, more admirable way? Or just some random Fallen angel we haven't the pleasure of knowing his name?

Maybe that's the whole point though since that's part of the mystery in this piece. Other than that I really like this piece :D

[MySecretMuse]

I like that you used the idea that all darkness is not necessarily evil, considering that is usually what fallen angels are portrayed to be in literature.

[Coyote Poetry]

Many fallen angels upon the earth. Hard to see them. Hiding behind tears and heartbreak. You create a strong vision with the strong description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote