October

She was walking alone
His eyes were as dead as the stones,
That lay beneath her, 
While she had to endure
The taking of her pride
Just so he could get high
Off her physical pain
As hatred pulsed through her veins
And then he pulled a knife
With which he took her life
After using her as his toy
It was all part of his ploy
They say she brought it upon herself
Putting her on the shelf
As another tragic tale
But this one will not fail
To haunt me till my last breath 
Is taken by death
For to me she was not just another story
Of a life taken in a way so gory.
I will never forget what he did to her
For she was my sister.

February 17, 2012

Reviews

[KurKota]

I feel badly of course that this really happened to your sister. If this is truly based on a real situation, which I will take that it is, then to review it as a piece of writing seems shallow and even inappropriate. I will just say that I am sorry that this and these type of episodes do happen, and I feel badly for you and your sister in particular as written about here.