B-B-Break Me

Lyrics to an unfinished song of some description

If I break your heart,

Can I remake it?

I'm not looking to fall in love,

Just a hope to make it,

Just give me that one chance,

For a beautiful and bloody romance,

Have me, take me,

Make me, break me.

Crush me but be gentle,

Hold me til I break,

We're just naked souls beneath this skin,

And I don't want to be alone again,

Rise up to the rush, give in to the crush

Confess to me all your sins,

I'll mend you, I'll bend you to my will.

I know you can take it,

I think we can make it.

(Just shut up and kiss me)

I know you oh so well

And you can't deny it,

I know you'd learn to love the venom,

If you just step up and try it.

To stop you being far too sick,

I'll feed on your electric,

Until you're chained to me,

At least digitally.

Touch me, hate me,

Burn me, break me.

Crush me but be gentle,

Hold me til I break,

We're just naked souls beneath this skin,

And I don't want to be alone again,

Rise up to the rush, give in to the crush

Confess to me all your sins,

I'll mend you, I'll bend you to my will.

I know you can take it,

I think we can make it.

(Just shut up and kiss me)

Author's Note

I have had this sitting about for ages and cannot think of how to alter or finish the bloody thing, every time I look at it I want to change it so, SOD IT, here it is XD

Reviews

[AquaWater5674]

Hmmm.
I read the reviews and enjoyed them...
So much depth here...
Reminds me of an addiction...
Anyone we may turn to...
Our "naked souls"...
Crying out to be sated...
Amazing piece..
You are so very talented...
Your creativity...
May have been lying dormant...
But it has always been there...
And forever will be..
It's a gift...
Thank You for sharing your
Thoughts and verse with us..
Debbie

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the energy and the drive of your words.
"Touch me, hate me,
Burn me, break me. "
The lines are true. In the midnight hours. Two people seeks some kind of salvation. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Insight "MH"]

It's bloody gorgeous, this is how to be brave in loving someone. Well done my dear friend ^_^

[kyam]

Wow! This is Fantastic....asking for what she wanted boldly, so feeling and makes you want to read it! Flows very well......Kyam

[Hope Rose]

here i was thinking i could write a decent song one sleepless night. at 4 am i log on here, see this beautiful thing, and say "nope best leave song writing to you"

this really is beautiful, stunning, and other things i just cant think of lol nice work, keep it up my friend :)

[Reshma]

Hi dear, it has been long time since I read your poem :) and as always totally worth the wait, may be its me but I feel like this lover can be the death or a pain that always haunt us taunt us and still we cannot separate it or take it away.... That is actually the beautiful bloody romance.. Its just a perception, may be i am totally wrong :)

[1]

What you have thus far is simply................................. Beautiful! It's never too late to finish it."Touch me, hate me, Burn me, break me", there's such irony in those words. Great piece!