Lost kids

We're the kids with our headphones in our ears

Listening to music as loud as we can

not to annoy the people next to us

but to forget the demons in the back in our heads.

We're the kids who write depressing poems,

but not because we are but because everything around us is.

We're the kids who maybe don't look like we want to spread love and kindness

but you don't know

you don't know us

Our passions

Our obsessions about making people laugh

We're the kids who want to change something.

We maybe wear dark clothe,

but the only thing we try to do is bring light in all the darkness society trapped us in.

We're the kids who maybe don't do the stuff you tell us to

but we're the kids who would stand up for each other every second

You can call us rebels

But we will show everyone we're more then rebels

because our thoughts are going to be louder then all your filthy words will ever be 

because we're the echo in the back in your head

and before you speak ur last word

we still gonna take our last breath from our broken lungs and it's going to change everything

We are the change

And i can feel how everything they build up is slowly breaking

so watch out

Because the next time you blink,

We're maybe already going to be the one who make the rules.

Reviews

[Jesse Gonzalez]

I like this piece of writing. It expresses the strong emotions you're feeling towards society as a whole and how they keep us down because we are different and do not follow the way everyone else has followed and we do not go around doing what everyone else is doing. We don't go around thinking the thoughts that everyone else thinks. We are truly different and we will soon make change. I like how you express the next generation who will stand tall and make a difference in the world and change humanity for the better. Though we are not what we seem to be, we are the next continuing revolution. We are the change and we are the most impressive part of society left. I feel as if you think highly of yourself and that you feel you're here for change and peace and the greatest things that the world has to offer. I think you feel as if no one understands you and the differences you have between the average person. I think you know what is to come and that you are the reason for the coming of change! Let me know if I am off or if I am right.

[Marie]

First of all thank you so much for taking your time to first read this poem and comment on it you got the thought of it right even tho I do not feel like no ones understands me the whole poem should just show that even tho our generation is really messed up bc of society and even tho all the generation before us think we're not gonna be any good we will change and definitely for the better