"To get to the other side"

"To get to the other side"

A Poem by Blank_fortunes
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Love is a Journey always...

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I realize I'm in Love with you.
It's more than what it used to be. I converted all my fantasies of you into reality.
There were a lot of things I wanted to do with you.
I didn't let any opportunity pass me by.
I've seen you mad, I've seen you Love, I've seen you laugh, and I've also seen you cry.
Seeing you gets sweeter by the day.
Bing couldn't catch a better picture than the thought of you right by my side.
You heard me laugh, You've touched my heart you made me mad, 
You've seen me cry.
You've wiped your sweat from my face.
I've wiped my sweat from your neck You and I have really seen the skies.
We know what it means to be all in.
We've been walking for a minute and now that we are in the middle of the street I been thinking...
I was young and dumb, I wised up and asked a few wise people a few wise questions. A few wise people gave me a few wise answers and now I am able to hold wisdom filled objective discussions.
I can see us being together right here in the middle of traffic
but not forever cause neither you nor I go together well with stagnant.
You know I've never asked a lot of you 
So all I am asking...
Is that you allow me to keep holding your hand as we take a little walk through the rest of this traffic.
See what I am saying is I'm getting older and you're definitely getting older too
And since we are doing the same thing I wouldn't mind getting older with you.

© 2013 Blank_fortunes


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Just clicked on a random name and got blessed with reading a such a fantastically written piece of work. I absolutely adore it and it was smooth and to the point yet intriguing to my eyes and my mind :) Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blank_fortunes

11 Years Ago

thank you so much feel free to check out the others. thank you for commenting.
Very profound poem. I hope you and your special person get old together. Nicely penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Blank_fortunes

11 Years Ago

thank you.
See what I am saying is I'm getting older and you're definitely getting older too
And since we are doing the same thing I wouldn't mind getting older with you.

very nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Blank_fortunes

11 Years Ago

Thank you
This was a great masterpiece . Kept me wondering what the next line would read .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Blank_fortunes

11 Years Ago

thank you so much
This was really beautiful you defiantly explained the journey of love very well through this poem :) Excellent work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blank_fortunes

11 Years Ago

thank you for reading and taking the time out to review it. You have some pretty impressive work you.. read more

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Added on May 23, 2013
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Tags: Road, thinking older, get older, Loving, life, living, objective, middle of traffic

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Blank_fortunes
Blank_fortunes

Durham, NC



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